Sentence Boundaries
I. Run-Ons
Combining two or more sentences without appropriate conjunctions and/or punctuation results in a run-on sentence.
Study these examples.
- My dad came to pick me up this morning my school bag is still in the back of your car I was wondering if maybe you could drop it off on your way home. (incorrect)
- My dad came to pick me up this morning, but my school bag is still in the back of your car, so I was wondering if maybe you could drop it off on your way home. (correct)
The three sentences are joined without appropriate conjunctions and/or punctuation.
- My dad came to pick me up this morning
- my school bag is still in the back of your car
- I was wondering if maybe you could drop it off on your way home.
II. Comma Splices
Combining two or more sentences with commas results in comma-spliced sentences.
Study these examples.
- Topic sentences are important, they introduce the controlling idea of a paragraph. (incorrect)
- Topic sentences are important, for they introduce the controlling idea of a paragraph. (correct)
Correct the following.
- It was close to 7 o’clock, I began to prepare dinner.
- My grandparents have a small field they grow vegetables.
- It was mid-June when we went to Florida we spent the whole summer there.
- I will learn, how to enrich and change the lives of those, I come into contact with.
- I decided to take a class outside of my major, I ended up taking an introductory physics class.
III. Fragments
When an incomplete sentence is treated as if it were a complete sentence, it is a fragment error.
Study these examples.
- The painting won a prize because was so original. (incorrect)
- The painting won a prize because it was so original. (correct)
The subject "it" is omitted.
- After they finished practice. (incorrect)
- After they finished practice, they drove home. (correct)
This is a dependent clause because it begins with "after." For the sentence to be complete, the dependent clause should be connected to the independent clause.
Correct the following:
- Or that they both try different ways to save the economy and health care.
- A war that I feel has lost its purpose, control, and support.
- A man who knows and understands the needs that the majority of citizens in this country express.
- Facts such as who has the ability to make change in this country and which candidate has a plan to get us out of this economic downfall.
- Although he arrived late for his flight.
References
Explanations and some examples are adapted with modifications from the following resources:
Ferris, D. (2014). Language power: Tutorials for writers. Boston: Bedford/St Martin's.